Slightly inspired by Christopher Marlowe's "Passionate Shepherd to his Love"
He's one of my favorites.
Oh, you can even read the poem as every third line as a stand alone poem! I thought it was neat, but I'm easily amused.
You trap me!
You grasp me!
-twine me in your lace
Pull me close!
Press me tight!
-to cover me: lips and face
You kiss me!
You bite me!
-where our bodies fall in place
You breathe me!
You feel me!
-with skin to skin; touching trace
Sink in words!
Down in moan!
-in our passionate state of grace
Think me there!
Kissing lips anew!
-so remember when i've been replaced
I trap you!
I grasp you!
-how you'll never forget my taste
ta da!
-jsn
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heh, I actually prefered the "third line" version of the poem. XD
ReplyDeleteI agree with Daniel. I like the third line version more. Yeah, about my blog. I try to write when I have the time. I'm swamped with my classes right now. I swear it feels like I have a test every three days. My rotations are killing me. I'll write when I can.
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